1st Place, News Story
2024-25, Division 4, News Writing
By Sharon Chang & Jenny Sun
The Day Times
Detroit Country Day School
Standing in the front lobby looking at the gift tags hanging on the tree, eighth grader Dylan Fitzgerald was stuck. He could not decide between donating the Lego set or the warm sweater to the Cass Community Center.
As weather starts to get cold and leaves start to fall, Detroit Country Day begins its holiday celebration and its spirit of giving. Every year, the Community Service Club in the lower, middle, and upper school hosts the “One Country Day Holiday Delivery” to make sure everyone can enjoy the holiday gift-giving spirit.
On November 18, all campuses started collecting gift donations. In the upper school, Christmas trees with gift tags on the branches were located in the front lobby and the library. These gifts were distributed to Cass Community Social Services on December 12. Cass then brought those gifts to families the following Monday.
Last year, together with its 100 employees the Cass Community Social Services provided gifts and clothing items to 1,500 people.
“The One Country Day Holiday Giving Delivery gives students the opportunity of giving back to the city of Detroit and building empathy during the holiday times,” said Laura Beachum, organizer of the middle school event.
Beachum believes that it is important for our community to share with those who
are less fortunate and connect together. Upper school community service member
and event organizer Ty Rosenberg also agrees with the community connection and gift-giving culture of the holidays.
“Whether it is watching a Christmas movie, or singing a holiday song, the holidays should
be a time free of stress and filled with jubilation. The ‘One Country Day Holiday Delivery’ is a way to provide experiences to those who aren’t as privileged as a lot of us at DCDS,” said Rosenberg.
The Community Service Club in the upper school worked hard to collaborate with the middle and lower school campuses to make sure this event was a success. Alexa Keramidas, president of the Community Service Club, believes that there is an evident benefit when working with the middle school campus.
“When the drive is over, the community service clubs bring all the donations down to the middle school during one of the club meeting times. It’s really nice to be physically connected to the middle school campus because it’s easy to transfer the gifts. We don’t
have to rent anything or spend extra money,” said Keramidas.
Since the start of this tradition nine years ago, students have enjoyed their experience of giving back. This holiday giving drive has helped teach two important lessons during the holiday season: giving back and coming together.
Laura Beachum added, “Each DCDS campus may have different drives and
activities to support the event, but we all work together as one community to give back to Cass.”
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