1st Place, Personality Profile
2023-24, Division 3, Yearbook Verbal
By Natalie Garwood
Warrior
Utica HS
Y-05. Personality Profile
A single story that focuses on one teacher, coach, staff member, student or student-athlete that makes the character three dimensional. An individual story may not be submitted in more than one writing category.
Judging Criteria
- Clear, relevant, engaging angle that makes story worthy of inclusion
- Solid lead that draws reader into story
- The conclusion ties back to the central point of the story and leaves an impression on the reader by using a powerful quote, vivid anecdote or important point that acts as a “kicker.”
- Meaningful student quotes that enrich story and reflect effective interviewing
- Evidence of adequate research
- Story goes beyond superficial coverage to give a total perspective and feel for the subject
- Adheres to rules of good journalism including: short paragraphs, effective transitions and use of active voice, freedom from editorial comment, careful editing and proofreading to eliminate mechanical errors, correct use of grammar