1st Place, Feature Writing – Organizations
2023-24, Division 2, Yearbook Verbal
By Amelia Pauly
Ceniad
East Lansing HS
Y-03. Feature Writing – Organizations
A single story that gives the reader a fresh view of the organization. This may include school clubs, performance-related school groups (band, drama and choir) and community, church and philanthropic groups relevant to students in the school. Feature coverage emphasizes human-interest angles (who, why and how) over traditional hard news elements (what, when).
Judging Criteria
- Clear, relevant, engaging human-interest angle
- Solid lead that draws reader into story
- The conclusion ties back to the central point of the story and leaves an impression on the reader by using a powerful quote, vivid anecdote or important point that acts as a “kicker.”
- Meaningful student quotes that enrich story and reflect effective interviewing
- Evidence of adequate research
- Story does not center on purpose of group or simply review their activities
- Adheres to rules of good journalism including: short paragraphs, effective transitions and use of active voice, freedom from editorial comment, careful editing and proofreading to eliminate mechanical errors, correct use of grammar