1st Place, In-Depth Feature
2023-24, Division 1, News Writing
By Chloe Rathbun
Knight Life
Loy Norrix HS
“There are innocent children and families that die every single day, and it’s not okay to just live your life as if nothings happening, especially if it’s not impacting you directly,” said Kalamazoo College student Mahum Khan.
On Oct. 7, 2023, the conflict between Israel and Palestine escalated when Palestinian militants from the Islamic Resistance Movement, Hamas (Harakat al-Muqawama al-Islamiya), crossed the border at the Gaza Strip, killing at least 250 Israeli citizens as well as injuring over a 1 thousand more with their barrage of rockets. Since Oct. 7, over 15 hundred Israelis have been killed by airstrikes or on ground conflicts.
The death toll of Palestinians has been steadily rising since Oct. 7. According to Al Jazeera, over 10 thousand Palestinians have been killed as of Nov. 6 since Israel launched their counterattack against the Gaza Strip.
“I don’t have any blood ties with Palestinians that have been killed in Gaza, but all of us Palestinians are one,” said Kalamazoo Central High School senior Khadra Jaber. “We are all family in Palestine and will continue to be that way.”
Although not living in Palestine like Jaber, many Kalamazoo residents feel a deep pain for the Palestinians killed in the recent months.
“It just hurts seeing all the children dying and it hurts paying for that hurt,” said Western Michigan University graduate Ramea Al-Mubarak.
According to Insider, “The US government has provided more aid to Israel than it has to any other foreign country since World War II.”
“I pay 30% of my salary for a government that sends it [tax money] to people that are okay with occupation and are okay with killing kids,” said Al-Mubarak.
In 2023 alone, the United States Congress has allocated 3.8 billion dollars towards Israel’s military. Many Palestinians and allies are outraged by this and call on the U.S. government to rescind funding of Israel.
“America funds Israel with more than 16 million dollars and weapons each year. Israel bombs Gaza and America pays for it,” said Jaber.
Jaber moved from America back to Palestine in late 2020. She is currently enrolled in an online program at Central to allow her to live in Palestine and continue to go to American school.
Although Jaber lives in the West Bank, away from the Gaza Strip, her city still faces dangers from Israeli settlers.
“Let’s forget about Gaza,” said prominent leader in Kalamazoo’s Muslim community, Imam Hafiz Nauman. “Look at the West Bank. Settlers come and they’re armed. They harass and they start killing people in the West Bank, and Israeli military often just stand by and give them cover.”
In a press release given by the United Nations on Oct. 24, Secretary-General Antonio Guterres stated, “The attacks by Hamas did not happen in a vacuum, with the Palestinian people being subjected to 56 years of suffocating occupation.” Guterres condemns Hamas’ attacks against the Israeli population and declares a state of humanitarian crisis for Gaza citizens.
“People are dying without food and shelter,” said Nauman. “Millions of people are being told to move from North to South and it’s a very small strip, one of the world’s most dense areas. I don’t know what’s going to be the outcome.”
In the desperation for change that many Palestinians and allies feel, there is a deep sense of grief.
“I have personally known people in Gaza who have lost their relatives. I know a family, they literally lost 17 members. Their entire family, except one little girl, got wiped out in one [air] strike, so I have been very deeply affected,” said Nauman.
The Palestinian people haven’t been the only victims of Israel’s counterbombings. Israel has gotten into several skirmishes with the Lebanese Hezbollah, coming to a head Oct. 11, when Hezbollah sent rockets into Israel. According to Reuters, Israel military forces responded by bombing South Lebanon.
“I’m an ally, but I am also Lebanese,” Kalamazoo College student Lina Mogrhabi said, her eyes filling with tears. “Lebanese villages are also getting bombed too so it’s really important to be here and spread the word.”
As said by PBS, on Oct. 27 all internet was shut down in Gaza, allegedly by Israeli military forces. Jaber stated that throughout this time period, several Palestinian Instagram accounts that were getting out crucial information regarding the attacks in Gaza went silent or were completely banned.
“I think it’s most important to speak up when it’s not impacting you because you have the ability to do something about it, you have a voice and those people don’t,” said Khan.
Although oftentimes this conflict is boiled down to a clash between religious values and ideologies, many Muslim’s disagree.
“In Palestine, it’s not only Muslims, it’s also Chrisitans. It’s forbidden in both religions to be against or hate other religions such as Judaism,” said Jaber. “We are against the Israeli government.”
At the protest, the gathering was led in a dua, an Islamic prayer for peace, across the war-ridden region.
“Today, I actually got a phone call from a Rabbi. The Rabbi himself is praying in his congregation for peace,” said Nauman. “Even though people are hurt, they have lost family members, civilians. Some of the moderate voices in the Jewish community are openly saying that this disproportionate killing has to stop.”
NW-11. In-Depth Feature
The entry should be a single story. Judges will not consider sidebars, infographics or other elements packaged with the story. The story must stand on its own. Entries should concern subjects of a substantive and contemporary nature and go beyond the surface facts, give the reader detailed background information with interpretation based upon the facts and background information and often (but not necessarily) an analysis as to its meaning. It is an elaboration of the WHY. Multiple sources are necessary.
Judging Criteria
- Lead captures attention, arouses curiosity
- Topic relevant to interests and/or welfare of school or students
- Extensive, intensive and thorough investigation
- Effectively combines basics of good news and feature writing
- Effectively organized with smooth transitions; carefully outlined
- Sentences, paragraphs of varied length; written clearly, concisely and vividly
- Proper diction/grammar
- Balanced and fair presentation
- Story relies on information from primary sources gathered/interviewed directly by the journalist(s); general Internet sources and secondary media reports are used sparingly