1st Place, Caption Writing
2021-22, Division 2, Yearbook Verbal
By Gabrielle Rhodes & Amiya Bush
Warrior
Utica HS
Page 36: At their first rehearsal in March, junior Jordyn Wurth and seniors Jacob Troye and Grace Leonardi are in their blocked spots for “Crafting a Killer.” “The audition process was different than normal shows, but our directors Maria and Trin did a great job of keeping the energy and the spirit of theatre alive, even with virtual auditions and rehearsals,” senior Grace Leonardi said. “Though it was very different and a lot more challenging on all parties; this goes to prove that the arts can go on safely amidst a pandemic, and I am proud to be a part of it.” Students planned to record the show at the end of year, due to the district’s decision not to reopen schools first semester.
Page 37: Every year, the residents of Tilson Street, located in nearby Romeo, go all-out on their Halloween decorations. While the street is always filled with tourists annually, it was even more popular than ever during the pandemic, since Terror on Tilson Street is an outdoor event. “I think it’s amazing how most of their profits go toward charities,” junior Kaitlyn Witkowski said. “It shows how the neighbors of Tilson Street care about the community and put hard work into their displays to help those in need.” The residents of Tilson street sold concessions, merchandise, and parking passes to raise money for local charities, programs, and schools.
Page 42: When COVID restrictions brought an end to pasta parties, coach Megan Berry brought in a box of uncooked noodles for a fun photo. “Though the team couldn’t have a pasta party due to mask requirements, they still wanted to have fun,” Berry said. “I saw this as golden opportunity and brought in noodles–but not cooked; just plain raw noodles.” Pasta parties are normally a tradition for runners to carb-up before each race.
Y-07. Caption Writing
For one entry, submit a set of three captions along with their photographs; one of the three captions must be for a sport.
Judging Criteria
- Each caption begin with a strong lead, not name or title
- Each caption contains at least two sentences that answer all reader’s questions without stating the obvious. Typically the first sentence is in present tense and remaining sentences are in past tense.
- Evidence of adequate research, providing information that adds to reader’s understanding of event or situation
- Clearly identifies all people who are the focus of the photo with both first and last names (typically no more than eight identified in photos showing multiple people). Sports captions should also identify names of players on the opposing team as well as provide jersey numbers for all players named in the caption.
- Adhere to rules of good journalism including: active voice, freedom from editorial comment, careful editing and proofreading to eliminate mechanical errors, correct use of grammar